Tuesday, January 18, 2011


Because we are starting on story creating this week, I'm re-posting a blog from September of last year. It's still timely and informative and gives you a pretty good idea about how to come up with story ideas and how to pose them to me, including the research you'll need to put in your package.

Story ideas. Where do we get them? How do we convince others that we have a good story worth doing? How do we keep our audience interested in the story we are telling?

It all starts with a good story idea that is well-written, has a distinct angle, good characters, relevant to our audience, compelling visuals, well-researched and newsworthy.

The reason we turn in story ideas is because I want you to begin to think in terms of a reporter, producer or photographer about what makes a story worthy of your time and research. I also want you to become better writers and researchers as well as being a good journalist. You have to be able to incorporate numerous pieces of data yet filter out the irrelevant information to focus your stories. That's hard. So, let me tell you what I'll look for when I grade story ideas.

Start out by looking around for something that's interesting to you. Look at local news in papers, newscasts, magazines and radio. Look at bulletin boards, newsletters or subjects that you and your peers are talking about. As your parents what's going on or look on the internet news websites.

If it is a national story, you must localize it, or determine an angle that's relevant to your audience. Your audience would be teenagers in the metro Atlanta area as well as adults (parents and educators) who might see your story on Eagle TV or on Cobb EdTV.

Do research. Do you have information that supports your angle? Are there enough visual possibilities to make it TV-friendly? Are there local experts that are available for you to interview about it? And most importantly, can you tell the story through the eyes, or experience, of someone who has been there?

Once you've done these first few steps, you are ready to write your proposal. The elements that need to be in your proposal are: a statement of what story type it is, a summary, how will you tell the story, who are your potential characters, elements to include in the story and any background information or statistics.

Here's my idea....I recently saw on the TV news the results of a recent study that says that teenagers are physically incapable of waking up early because of their body clocks and a later start time for schools is being pushed in some states. So I did some internet research:


The Story Idea Summary part of your proposal begins, "this is a story about..." and explains what makes the story relevant or newsworthy? Why would your audience want to see it? This is your "elevator pitch".
This is a story about a new study that says teenagers are biologically incapable of being alert during the early start times of middle and high school. Some people believe that later start times would decrease absenteeism and increase grades.
Telling the Story. Describe how you'll open the story, what you'll go to next and how you will end it. Tell us who we will be meeting and why they are important.
I will open the story by talking about the role sleep plays in our life then spotlighting a student who has had incredible difficulty with staying awake for his early classes over the last few semesters (not just one semester to rule out a problem subject matter) perhaps even find someone who has had sleep studies done. I will then go into the study and other statistics about sleep patterns and teenagers. I will then revisit the student at the end of the story with his solution to sleep deprivation.
Potential Characters. List the characters in their order of importance to your story. Who are the people you want to interview or what kind of people do you want to interview? What role do they play in your story?
I will interview, of course, a student or students who have trouble staying awake in the mornings, parents of those students who can talk about their son or daughter's sleep habits (and maybe frustrations with teacher calls!) and sleep experts from a local sleep study center. I may also talk to a teacher or two. I know a student named Jason who has had a very difficult time in his first block classes over the last few years. Perhaps he would be willing to talk about his experiences.
Elements. This is for you to describe any visuals or pictures that will be part of your story. Very important! How do you plan to cover your story outside of interveiws? There must be pictures or video! Warning...you don't want to "stage" your video!
I will get video (and permission to use it) from a sleep study center and possibly use some of the video of people sleeping, I'll get alarm clock videos, unmade beds, students attentive in class and some with their heads on their desks. Footage of class changes and teachers teaching in class, maybe students drinking coffee or caffeinated soda to stay awake.
Additional Background. This is for statistics and background information that supports why your story is newsworthy. this is NOT copied and pasted research. It is information that indicates that you've done your research and drawn your own conclusions about how it relates to your story and angle. It shows that you understand and care about your story and how it can be relevant to your audience. It could also be background information on your characters who are in your story. It is information that you may use in your story, but not necessarily. his shows me that you've at least done some preliminary research and that you have evidence to support that this is a valuable story and not just piles of data.

According to the Mayo clinic website, our internal clock guides when we feel sleepy or awake. They are called our circadian rhythms. As a young person, our circadian rhythms signal us to get sleepy around 8 or 9pm. As we approach our teenage years, that internal clock doesn't make us tired until about 11pm or midnight. Because studies reveals that teens need at least 9 hours of sleep to feel alert during the daytime, early morning start times for school make that difficult. Countries as far away as Isreal are looking at this data and are beginning to take note by changing school start times in hopes that teens will succeed more in school. The Sleep for Science research highlights why teens are challenged by an early school start.
Lastly, make sure that you attach any supporting materials to your story idea. Print out websites or cut out articles of your sources. Remember that if you quote statistics in your story, you must attribute them to the proper source.
Your question this week, therefore, is what story ideas do you have that you might like to produce? Come up with some good ones and tell me why they are important and who you would interview and what kind of supporting material/statistics you would use.

16 comments:

  1. My story this week would have something to do with the drama department. I think others should know what goes on in the Musical Theatre classes. I think by doing this story, it will 1) boost ticket sales and 2) increase the class size next semester. Believe it or not, there is A LOT of work that goes into putting on a production. Currently we are working on cleaning up the stage and I believe that people need to see us working AS WELL AS having fun doing the script so they get a general idea of how a theatre production comes together.

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  2. I think a good story would be interviewing homeless teens in our area so that all the kids at our school could see how fortunate they are. Another story could be about older people who got hooked on drugs at a young age our now drug addicts. This would be a good story so that students could see that if they dont stop doing drugs and drinking how their life could end up. I hope that me and my team can brainstorm and think of more stories!

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  3. I think a good story would be interviewing teens/adults about what happens to you when you multitask and text and the sametime. For instance,texting while walking down the stairs. I've seen students do it at school and lets just say the end results aren't good. Recently on the news they showed a story about this lady who was texting in the mall and walked right into a fountain.This is an important story because we could show how unaware people are when there texting.
    -Laurian Lackey

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  4. A good story idea? Uhmm.. I think a good story idea would be pregnant homeless teens. It would benefit teenagers and parents. Let us see as teens, what it's like out there on our own. We all act like we're grown anyways. I will come up with more good stories in the future.

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  5. A very opportunistic story would be one that shows the lives of our fellow class mates that have hit on hard times and are currently the only people in their household that have a job and are supporting themselves. This story is very beneficial to the class as well as the school, it helps people to understand that (1) they aren't the only people in the world with this problem and (2)that there is help available. Supporting details and outside experts would be people such as the health teacher the counselor and some sort of medical expert. These people will bring in facts and great soundbites as well as great b-roll to make the story as good as it could possibly be.

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  6. I think a good possible story idea would be to interview the teen mothers/ fathers at our school. I have noticed an increase in the teen pregnancy rate at our school and I think it would be a great story as long as we did it discreetly and professionally. Another idea that we could do a package on is what couples at our school have in store for valentines day. My group has already started working on the Vo/SOT/VO assignment but it can easily be made into a package.

    Artis Staton

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  7. I would like to do a package on America's most recreational drug, caffeine. It affects teenagers we would be able to interview students an the outside source would be the school nurse

    -Moshe J. Holmes

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  8. I would like to produce a story on students at school who feels as if they want to give up in school and why. Now days, many teens don't like school(including myself at times) for many different reasons such as peer pressure, work is too hard, bulling, etc. Then I would interveiw highschool dropouts and ask questions such as what happened to/for them later in life,and what would they go go back an dchange. Then I would look uo different statics based upon highschool... Maybe it will inspire someone or change some teens mind. Napiera Barclit

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  9. A great story idea would be ..

    -Smaller Lunches
    -(I really want to do) 2011 SCH Prom Rules 101 (comedy)
    -History on our teachers before the start teaching
    -Mrs.Watson, Hard Work/Great Teacher
    -(I will Complete) No Hall Pass
    -New School Curiculum, after class of 2011
    -Star Student of the year (Jibby)
    -Real Majority
    -Local Weather
    -Daily Safety Tips

    I have more ideas, but i have alot of thought for this year's Eagle TV show.

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  10. I would like to produce a story about Georgia schools, low- accreditation scores and how do the students, teachers, and Administration feel about how this will effect South Cobb High. I was watching the news a couple of days, ago and they mentioned that our low accreditation score will; limit students on scholarships and possible colleges, and it will lay off teacher, and principle jobs are at risk. I just want to hear what south Cobb has to say about that... -Jeremy Weaver

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  11. The overuse of technology is a growing epidemic. I feel that technology is taking over the world at a rapid pace. Pretty soon the world we be ruled by technology. This would be a good story to speak of.
    -Zeiquaan White

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  12. I want to do a package on the damages of alcohol, since Four Lokos were recently banned, then sold illegally, then put back on the market. Alcohol and teens don't mix; I'm pretty sure the affects does more damage to our system than a fully-developed adult's system.
    We could state statistics on what it does to the body, having a doctor go into further detail. We could maybe educate our viewers on how alcohol causes the body to feel the way it does when you're "drunk," in a medical sense.
    To me that would be a great package, along with student perspective, and it should steer students to not drink alcohol, as by law, they shouldn't be anyway.

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  13. My story would be about how hard student athletes work outside the field so that they win games to make the school look good. because lets face it who would want a school with a loosing team. This movie would encurage more students to out to games to encurage and support their team mates. By doing this it would also help the school earn more money which could be used to buy aquipment for the team. Interviews could be done on trainnig athletes to see their side of their oppinion and how they feel about it. Juan Millan

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  14. i think a good story idea would be to interview teens inside and outside of school about teen drinking/smoking abuse . i would be able to have a connection because i am a teenager and they probably would feel better talking to me because i am around their age . the topic would answer questions like do they do it to deface problems in their lives or is it pressure so they can fit in etc . it is really becoming a big thing in the world because the drinking and smoking age is getting younger and younger . i think that would be a great idea

    kierra rubin

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  15. A great story idea would be one about the senior class , what they have planned before the end of the year (spring break, prom etc.). We could use video footage of them all interacting with each other. I think this would be great because it could show the lower class how to have a great class and come together as one. It will also give the other classes ideas of what to do their senior year.

    DIAMOND CORNELIOUS

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  16. I think a good story would be on the addiction teenagers have to technology. It's obviously a rising issue, considering that some people can't go to seconds in class without pulling out their cell phones.

    Heaven Johns

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